Mia Agustina
who was born in Singaraja, 30 August 1994 is my best friend. I usually call her Mia. She is my
friend from Junior High School until Senior High School. In Junior High School
we were not in same class but we knew each other. In Senior High School we were
in same class from first grade until third grade. We were a classmate, we
shared many things together, we laughed, we cried, we shared our stories
honestly and we know each other family. I have some best friend in Senior High School, but Mia is the best among the other. Her appearance and her
personality makes her very special to me.
Mia has black-long wavy hair. She has
pointed nose that makes her
looks like Arabian. She has bright smile that always comfort me when I felt unwell. Mia has narrow eyes and she wears glasses
since in Elementary School. Her body is like my body but she is thinner than
me. She has white complexion because she is very care with her skin. Mia is
very aware with her appearance. She doesn’t want to look bad in front of other
people. The other people said that Mia looks very attractive.
Not just attractive, Mia also has
good personality. Mia always care with other people around her. She is calm but
when she with me she will be hyperactive girl. She is kind of person that keep
my secret well. I trust her like I trust my family. She is good listener too. Whenever
I need someone to share my stories, she
always beside me to listen my
stories. She always gave good advice for me. She is honest person. Sometimes when
I shared my stories, she gave me her honest opinion. If I did something wrong,
she would tell me I was wrong. I think she is more care to me than I do. She is
very aware with all little things I did. She spoiled person too. She likes to lay on my shoulder
or on my thigh. She also likes to hug me and cried in front of me. She is
childish too. That’s why I love her more than
the other friends.
Mia is my best friend and will be my best friend forever. We spend our time together
although we’re not in the same college. We meet each other on weekdays to share
our story and our feeling. Mia is very special for me and I am very happy to
have best friend like her with her
appearance and her personality.
Hello Jyoti, nice to visit your blog :D,
ReplyDeleteI love the way your describe about your best friend. I think you are so lucky and happy having a best friend like Mia :D
You already did your best in writing Jyoti, but you may pay attention in mechanics, grammar, and the organization of your writing because I found mistakes on that.
For example, in second paragraph, I think it is better to mention about what you gonna describe in the second paragraph, then continue by giving supporting paragraph. "Mia has a good appearance." then, you may continue your sentence "Mia has black-long wavy hair."
in this sentence "Mia also has good personality", you may add "a" before the word "good" so, it should be "Mia also has a good personality"
overall, I love your writing Jyoti.. Keep working :D