My
dad is the best dad in the world. People can say there is no perfect father in
this world, but for me, my dad is the perfect father in the world, although he
has many weaknesses. To be honest i really adore my dad. When I was child, I
had ever thought if I have a husband, he must be like my dad because everything
in my dad is very special, his appearance, his personality and his habits.
My dad has black-short wavy hair. He
has pointed nose and two deep dimples. Because of those dimples, he has bright
smile. He is about 170 cm height. He is hard-worker and always going outdoor to
do his job. That’s why his skin is brown. He is very casual. At first sight,
you can see that he doesn’t aware with his appearance, but if you know him well
like I do, you can notice that he’s really aware with his appearance and he
always teach me how to wear clothes perfectly. He likes to buy his clothes
wherever he goes. He likes soft color for his clothes. All of his clothes fit
well with the way he looks. In other words, my dad’s appearance is simply
casual.
Moving
to his appearance, my dad is the kind of person that interesting to listen and
always give good advice for his children. When I told my stories to my dad, he
would listen to me and gave his advice although I didn’t ask him to give me
advice. He is like my teacher for my life. My dad always gave honest opinion
for his children, if we were wrong, he would tell that we were wrong. In other
hand, my dad doesn’t talk too much. He won’t tell us if he has problem. He tried
to solve his problem by himself. He never rejects his children’s wishes. He will
try to fulfill our wishes. The most important thing he always does is he always
supports his children no matter what.
My dad
has a bad habit, which is he likes to speak frankly. He didn’t care with whom
he talks. Usually my dad doesn’t talk too much and doesn’t show his feeling a
lot. But, when he met with his friends and they talked together, my dad would
talks frankly if there was something that annoyed him. It also happens in our
family. He will talk frankly if his children did something wrong. I think that’s
not a big problem, he just want to be honest person and also he doesn’t mean it
seriously.
To conclude,
some people may think that my dad just like the other dad in the world, but I
don’t care because there was no someone else that I wanted to describe like my
dad that very special to me with his appearance, his personality and his
habbits. I have wonderful opportunity to have awesome dad in my life.
Good writing, Jyoti. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree with you. My father is the best father as well. My father is the most handsome man in this world. My father is my hero. :)
I also really like your writing. You have written an attractive story.
However, I think you have to pay attention on your grammar. For example, one of your sentences in the second paragraph. You wrote, "At first sight, you can see that he doesn’t aware with his appearance, but if you know him well like I do, you can notice that he’s really aware with his appearance and he always teach me how to wear clothes perfectly."
I think, the correct one is, "At first sight, you can see that he doesn’t aware with his appearance, but if you know him well like I do, you can notice that he’s really aware with his appearance and he always teaches me how to wear clothes perfectly."
Overall, you have done your best. Keep writing. :)