Final Free Hug Campaign

A Hug is All We Need

       Juan Mann did a lot of effort to disenchant people around him that hug is very important for peaceful. He wanted to campaign free hug and gave free hug for the other people who wanted hug from Juan Mann. He was walking around the street with holding the sign "Free Hug". At the first time, people around Juan Mann didn’t care about what he did. They just smiled as they passed Juan Mann. And then, a woman came closer to Juan Mann and he gave free hug to the woman. The other people who saw that event wanted to give free hug too. Some people who got the free hug from Juan Mann also made a sign like what he had. They also gave free hug to the other people. Unfortunately, the police wanted to stop the campaign because the campaign was illegal. The police avoid Juan Mann and the other people to do their action. After the police tried to stop the campaign, they made a petition to reach their target with collecting a signature from the other people who agree with free hug campaign.They got 10.000 signatures from the other people. After all, the police gave them permission to do the campaign again. The police also followed this campaign. Some reporters came to Juan Mann and they interviewed Juan Mann about free hug campaign.  

        In short, we should respect each other without regard to the differences between us. We should share what we feel, happy, sadness, laugh and anything. We also need build the togetherness to each other. A hug is the shortest distance between us! Big hug for all of youuuu~

Outline Paragraph “The Shortest Distance between Friends” by Sang Ayu Kompyang Arisetyawati.

Paragraph :

When we are sad, there are a lot of troubles that we have and we don’t know what to do, maybe a sincere hug from someone can make us calmer.  Maybe, it was the thought of the man in this to start the Free Hug campaign. In the video we can see, the man walked around the street with a cupboard that said “Free Hug” with a capital letter. The man looked tidy with his grey trousers, blue shirt and maroon vest. He was also wearing glasses. The man who has long black hair looked very confident to carry the cupboard from one place to another place with friendly face and smile to everyone. The name of the man is Juan Mann. Juan Mann is the first person who campaign about free hug, he wanted to spread peaceful and love to the world through hugs the other people. He offered free hugs to strangers in public places. At first, people didn’t give any respond to Juan Mann. Some people just saw him, smile, took his pictures and then they pass the man without giving attention to what the man did with his “Free Hug”. Juan Mann didn’t give up, he walked again and tried to get people’s attention.

After several minutes, he met with an old woman. The old woman saw Juan Mann’s cupboard and ask Juan Mann to hug her. This old woman was the first person who gave her hug to Juan Mann. After that event, many people changes their mindset, they began to pay attention to Juan Mann. One by one people around him wanted to hug him.  They hug each other happily, and then they smile each other after they did it. After all people did the free hug campaign, something bad happened. Police banned the Free Hugs campaign, they tried to stop the campaign which conducted by Juan Mann. But, Juan Mann didn’t stop the campaign. He tried to explain the purpose of the campaign to the police. He made petition to get one thousand signatures from people who agree with this campaign. Fortunately many people were touched and support this campaign. They gave their signatures to support this campaign. Some people even tried to talk with the police and hug the police. In the end of this video, the police allowed this campaign. I think the main point of this video is to keep our togetherness as a human who can’t live individually. As we know nowadays, people are getting rarely to socialize with other people who they do not know. In this video, Juan Mann tried to remind us to care about our environment and our social-life. We must share our love, happiness and respect to the others without differentiate each other. Big hug for you who read my blog ^^

Title                             : The Shortest Distance between Friends

Topic Sentence          :

            The man walked around the street with a cupboard that said “Free Hug” with a capital letter.

a. Major Supporting Sentence 1

            The man looked tidy with his grey trousers, blue shirt and maroon vest.

     Minor Supporting Sentence

-          He was also wearing glasses.

-          The man who has long black hair looked very confident to carry the cupboard from one place to another place with friendly face and smile to everyone

-          The name of the man is Juan Mann.

-          Juan Mann is the first person who campaign about free hug, he wanted to spread peaceful and love to the world through hugs the other people.

-          He offered free hugs to strangers in public places.        

b. Major Supporting Sentence 2

            At first, people didn’t give any respond to Juan Mann.

     Minor Supporting Sentence

-          Some people just saw him, smile, took his pictures and then they pass the man without giving attention to what the man did with his “Free Hug”.

-          Juan Mann didn’t give up, he walked again and tried to get people’s attention.

Topic Sentence          :

            After several minutes, he met with an old woman.

a. Major Supporting Sentence 3

            The old woman saw Juan Mann’s cupboard and ask Juan Mann to hug her.

     Minor Supporting Sentence

-          This old woman was the first person who gave her hug to Juan Mann.

-          After that event, many people changes their mindset, they began to pay attention to Juan Mann.

-          One by one people around him wanted to hug him. 

-          They hug each other happily, and then they smile each other after they did it.

b. Major Supporting Sentence 4

            After all people did the free hug campaign, something bad happened.

     Minor Supporting Sentence

-          Police banned the Free Hugs campaign, they tried to stop the campaign which conducted by Juan Mann.

-          But, Juan Mann didn’t stop the campaign.

-          He tried to explain the purpose of the campaign to the police.

c. Major Supporting Sentence 5

        He made petition to get one thousand signatures from people who agree with this campaign.

     Minor Supporting Sentence

-          Fortunately many people were touched and support this campaign.

-          They gave their signatures to support this campaign.

-          Some people even tried to talk with the police and hug the police.

-          In the end of this video, the police allowed this campaign.

Concluding Sentence                        :

            I think the main point of this video is to keep our togetherness as a human who can’t live individually.

Comment                               :

            I think, Osin’s writing is good. The organization and the sentences structure of Osin’s paragraph are good, but she must pay attention with the words that you used. You’re already correcting your wrong words. After all, you’ve good writing. You’re consistent with the tenses. 

My *Future* Private Room

Having a private room with a lot of books is my dream. I loved reading novels and read interesting books or magazine, thats why I need my private room where I can read quietly. I can't read with noisy sound or there are people around me. I need a quiet and comfortable place for reading or doing something that I love. I need a place where I can do everything that I want without interference from others. 

Here is the picture of my future private room. 

From the opposite of the door there are two book shelves and two side of computer desk. On the top book shelf I want to put some refrence books and some novels. The second one, I want to put my new DVD or CD. I put DVD or CD on the second book shelf is to make it easier to take the DVD when I want to watch it on the computer. On the computer desk there are printer, speaker, computer screen, keyboard, statue, air freshener and CPU. I just need one armchair in my room, if I put two armchairs it will make my room looks narrow. On the left of computer desk there is a very comfortable bed sofa. I put bed sofa near to the existing windows in the room because it will allows me to get light from outside the room and to see the scenery outside the room when I was bored to read the whole time. There is a pillow and a novel on the bed sofa. Behind the bed sofa, I also put a box with four shelves. I put my new novels collection there. It can make easier to me to take my novels when I lay down on the bed sofa. The last part and the unseen thing is refrigerator, I put refrigerator across of bed sofa. I put my favorite snacks and my favorite drinks in the refrigerator. I choose soft colors for my room because it also makes me feel comfort when I'm in the room. 

Okay, that's all about my super-relaxing-private-room. How about yours? 

The Greatest Day

Good night fellas~

This night I want to tell you about the greatest day that I've ever had.  

I’ll never forget the day when my brother graduated a few months ago in Bandung. I always wait for the time when is my brother's graduation, because I was able to visit him in Bandung, and then the time is came. My brother’s graduation was on the 20^th of July so I came to Bandung a few days before graduation’s day. My father bought 5 airplane tickets for us, which was for my father, my mother, me, my younger brother and for my aunt. We went to Bandung on 18^th of July, around 3 p.m., so we went to Denpasar early morning because we’ve to pick up my aunt. We arrived in Bandung at 6 p.m. When we arrived in Bandung, we headed to the inn that hired by my brother to put our baggage and take a bath. For the first night in Bandung, my brother took us to Paris Van Java (PVJ), we bought some clothes because there were discount for branded clothes. Not just clothes we also bought snack and water because in our inn they didn’t provide much water. After from PVJ we came back to the inn to take a rest. In the morning, we prepared ourselves to go to Dago. We went to Rumah Mode to bought some clothes again. From Rumah Mode, we went to find restaurant for our lunch. Next, we went to Gedung Sate, but we just saw Gedung Sate from our car. The next day, we went to Pasar Baru to bought clothes for our family in Singaraja. We stayed at Pasar Baru from 11 a.m. until 3 p.m. That was hectic day because we should to walk in the crowded place. At night, we should to take rest because the following day was my brother’s graduation. In the early morning, we prepared ourselves to go to my brother’s campus. My father and my mother also came into the hall with my brother. My younger brother, my aunt and me just stayed outside the hall, we could watch what happened inside the hall from the LCD. When my brother’s name called, I felt very excited and I felt proud to him because that was my first time to attending graduation. After the graduation we went to photo studio to take some formal photo. And the next day, we went to Braga area to look old building and tried some food around Braga. Finally the last day came, we prepared ourselves and our baggage because we should to go back to Singaraja. We went to airport at 9 a.m. and we arrived in Singaraja at 7 p.m. We felt tired and happy in the same time. That was very great days for me.

How To Clean Your Messy Room After Party

If you always have a messy room after the party, you should follow this step to make your room cleaner than before. First, you need to prepare all the cleaning equipment. Why? Because,  if you do not prepare them completely, it will waste your time to go back and forth taking clean-up equipment. Second, take all the rubbish and put them all into dustbin. You can put broken things or the things that not used again into dustbin. It can make your room look narrow. Next, clean all shelves, tables, sofas and all the stuff that is not on the floor with a clean towel to remove the dust. If you've cleared all, placed all the things like usual. And the last step, you can sweep all floors without exception such as under a sofa, a table or a bed. You can use vacuum cleaner if you have, it just need a short time and doesn't require a lot of energy if you use vacuum cleaner. Keep your room neat and looks spacious. Don't put the useless things in your room. You can sprayed air freshener to make your room more fragrant. Good luck and fighting! 

My Classmate

My classmate’s name is Luh Suweni. Her nickname is Weni. She comes from Tejakula, Buleleng. Hindu is Weni’s religion. She has one younger sister and one younger brother. Weni came to Singaraja eight years ago to continue her studies in SMP N 1 Singaraja and now she is 3^rd semester student of English Education Department, Undiksha. In Singaraja, she live at Perumahan Satelit Asri. Weni is hyperactive girl, but sometimes she just stand to see her friends action in the class.  I knew her when I was junior high school in SMP N 1 Singaraja that's why we close each other. She is very clever. English is her passion. Sometimes she teach me when I didn't understand about the lesson that given by lecturer. She's very outspoken but behind it she is very kind. Weni is very good at dancing. When she was in senior high school, she joined a dance club and she often followed dance competition. Not just about dance, she also very fond about fashion. She always bought fashion magazine and read it at her boarding house until midnight. Agnes Monica is her favorite singer and her role mode. We've same hobby, our hobby is reading novels. Weni and I also like all about South Korea. She know how to keep our conversation still alive and she is very good listener. With her, I can do crazy things that I can't do with the other friends

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